2 comments:
- Emma Burns on March 25, 2012 at 8:18 AM said...
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The word "delicious" works beautifully there to reveal a voice/mood... I think "shines shadows" is too soundy.
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- Chacha Murdick on March 26, 2012 at 12:27 PM said...
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i like that this poem invites us to eat music.
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